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Talk:Bayside Park Farm rainwater catchment system

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- Link user names into the Background Section

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Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

  • Abstract
    • Try avoid using third person (I,We,Our) etc..
    • Only need to describe the problem and the approach to solving that problem. Do not include project details yet.
  • Background
    • Good
  • Problem statement
    • good
  • Criteria
    • Table looks good
  • Literature Review
    • Add some more references
  • Construction
    • Be sure to move the Design section as a subheading into the construction section
    • Put captions onto each figure or photo. They need to be able to explain and stand alone in their description of the figure.
  • Timeline
    • Looks good in format, add some minor details to each deadline presented
  • Costs
    • Very Good, be sure that estimated costs for each component are accurate.
  • Operation
    • Mobile components need to have the caption below the figures and also be included into the construction section. For information about putting a caption onto a figure refer to appropedia help or my 215 project Zane Middle School RIPSAW
  • Maintenance
  • Schedule
  • Instructions
  • Conclusion
  • Testing results
    • include this section with some data
  • Discussion
  • Lessons learned
  • Next steps
  • Troubleshooting
    • add some steps to solving potential problems; links to external rainwater catchment systems
  • Team
  • Be sure to continue working hard, this was a good 1st draft. Finish up the remaining sections
  • References
    • Reference formatting looks good

Sorry I did not include this feedback before it was due. Add the troubleshooting and testing results sections and this page will be pretty good

--Drew91w (talk) 13:59, 17 May 2015 (PDT)