• All photographs and drawings should have author's name associated with it
  • The abstract section says your design powers kitchen appliances, such as a blender ---does the solution really power more than just a blender?
  • Criteria section needs editing for grammatical errors

I moved some photos around for easier reading and placed the picture of the design at the top to show it as the most important. I also edited some of the easier part like how you described choosing your solution in "Section 4.0" -people who visit your page may never see your design document.

Great page.

-Annie

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