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==Notes for Improvement==
==Notes for Improvement==
===General Notes===
===General Notes===
*Use the [[Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria]] page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
*Use the [[Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria]] page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
 
*Missing sections (Operation/Maintenance, Conclusions & Team)


*If you would like to make an image with a caption include "thumb" in the code. Resizing can also be done by adding a pixel number (I used 600px for your main image)
*If you would like to make an image with a caption include "thumb" in the code. Resizing can also be done by adding a pixel number (I used 600px for your main image)
*Click edit on this page to see example:
*Click edit on this page to see example:
[[Image:Las Malvinas current shade.jpg|thumb|right|100px|Current Las Malvinas Community Center Shade Structure]]
[[Image:Las Malvinas current shade.jpg|thumb|right|100px|Current Las Malvinas Community Center Shade Structure]]
===Abstract===
===Abstract===
*Good start... keep this updated as project progesses
*Good start... keep this updated as project progesses
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====Criteria====
====Criteria====
*Take out entire line for "Cells left-aligned, table centered" '''DONE'''
*Take out entire line for "Cells left-aligned, table centered" '''DONE'''
*How code should look (click edit to see):
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="margin: 1em auto 1em auto"
|-
! Criteria
! Constraints
! Weight (0-10)
|-
| Costs
| must be under $400 USD
| 8
|-
| Aesthetics
| must be pleasing to the eye and look professional and natural
| 7
|-
| Durability
| must be able to withstand the test of time, light vandalism and misuse, and fire
| 9
|-
| Weather
| must be able to withstand hurricanes, caribbean rain storms, and caribbean sun exposure
| 10
|-
| Protection
| must be able to protect occupants from rain and sun
| 10
|-
| Locality/Maintainability
| must be made from local and accessible materials and be easily and cheaply repaired
| 7
|}


===Final Design===
*Nice! Add an introduction to this section. Discuss your final design.


===Construction===
====Timeline====
====Timeline====
*Needs proposed completion column as well as an actual completion column '''NEEDS UPDATING'''
*Needs proposed completion column as well as an actual completion column '''NEEDS UPDATING'''
====Costs====
====Costs====
*Good start - keep updated '''NEEDS UPDATING'''
*Good start - keep updated '''NEEDS UPDATING'''
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*Once budget is complete expand on your introduction
*Once budget is complete expand on your introduction


===How To/Design===
===How To===
*Good start on the how to section, but it should be visible on your main project page. '''DONE'''
*I highly recommend revising your language in this section. Use descriptive language rather than prescriptive language. For example, in Step 2, describe how ''you'' harvested the bamboo rather than ''how to'' harvest bamboo.
*Good designs images.
 
===Maintenance===
ADD
 
===Conclusions===
ADD
 
===Team===
ADD

Revision as of 23:39, 2 July 2014

Notes for Improvement

General Notes

  • If you would like to make an image with a caption include "thumb" in the code. Resizing can also be done by adding a pixel number (I used 600px for your main image)
  • Click edit on this page to see example:
Current Las Malvinas Community Center Shade Structure

Abstract

  • Good start... keep this updated as project progesses
  • Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper) DONE

Background

  • Add the local name of the community center in Las Malvinas DONE
  • Consider revising sentence structure DONE
  • Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper) DONE
  • Go into detail about "local materials" that are available here DONE

Problem Statement

Criteria

  • Take out entire line for "Cells left-aligned, table centered" DONE

Final Design

  • Nice! Add an introduction to this section. Discuss your final design.

Timeline

  • Needs proposed completion column as well as an actual completion column NEEDS UPDATING

Costs

  • Good start - keep updated NEEDS UPDATING
  • Consider a total $US column DONE
  • Add any donations
  • Once budget is complete expand on your introduction

How To

  • I highly recommend revising your language in this section. Use descriptive language rather than prescriptive language. For example, in Step 2, describe how you harvested the bamboo rather than how to harvest bamboo.

Maintenance

ADD

Conclusions

ADD

Team

ADD

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