User talk:K. Carfang

[edit] Nice start on lit review

Kristin You may have narrowed your search down too much if there is only one article dealing directly with it -- my guess is, however, there is a lot of papers tangentially related to the topic - using slightly more open search terms will bring them out -- also try some of the University databases here--Joshua 14:23, 1 February 2008 (PST)

[edit] Good start

Hi Kristen

Good start on the article -- you need a lot more depth -- I also changed the title to fit the naming convention. Try using the REF button to insert your references so your text flows better.

--Joshua 11:01, 30 March 2008 (PDT)