Hello,
You guys do not have a lot on here yet so I do not have that many comments. The first if to add a statement like "this section is being worked on" to any section that is not completed yet. The section heading should be all capitalized not half and half, be consistent with capitalization and formatting Don't forget to add all your names and links to your personal appropedia pages at the bottom of the page with a link to it at the beginning of the page, something like "the group members (link)" . Try to add to your background and abstract, a bit more detail. Remember not to talk about anything till it is described. Your pictures all need a reference ( if it is your picture state that). Add Engineering 215: Intro to Engineering Design at Cal Poly Humboldt to your page that is why you are doing this project, it needs to be included. Be sure to reference your table in the paragraphs before it, same with figures. You say through the use of the "Delphi Method" in your description of the final design, regular people have no idea what that is, add a description. The sentence in the abstract, "Zane Middle School is dedicated to improving the education of its students and is also willing to provide engineering students from Cal Poly Humboldt with experience in design projects." is a bit strange, not sure it is needed, you are not trying to sell people on Zane. Nice drawing, needs caption with a description of what it is. Finally try to remember that this is being written for someone who has no idea about this project, this class, or anything about your topic. Really try to keep up on this page so you are not stuck doing a lot at the end of the semester.
Rebecca
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